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And thus ends the eight page opening of the comic. We'll be sure to update it page by page in the future over time as we explore into the Endless Winter and the search for a new land.

One bit of symbolism that wasn't in the original script, I added storm clouds on the bottom of the picture. This is to show how Pansy and Hurricane are past the storm and now move into a brighter and more hopeful future for the both of them.

This is it for now! The first eight pages of a fairly long comic. We hope you all enjoyed reading it, and we hope you all look forward to the next ones.

Art by James Corck.
Story by Rated R. Ponystar
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:iconanimatorsnake:
Animatorsnake Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2015
Flag bearer is a cool job
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:iconjamescorck:
jamescorck Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Yes it is.
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DarkBloodsFlame Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this was really good
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watcher25 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
interesting and not surprising concerning hurricane
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tank2259 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
noooo this is last page damit 
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jamescorck Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Actually, we are working on part 2. Stay tuned.
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:iconcommanderex:
CommanderEX Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014
Impressive comic. Just wow.
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:icondeadfactory-rd-brony:
I promise to remember your song of kindness 
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sweetymimy22 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014
s this the last page
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:iconnanorider426:
Nanorider426 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
*thumbs up* Yay!
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:iconmasterhunter666:
MASTERHUNTER666 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
simply, beautiful. :')
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:iconkennyg302:
kennyg302 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
Why can't I hold all of these feels. 
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:iconaramadon:
aramadon Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
Watching you because of this series.
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:iconbigkatana:
BigKatana Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
Great background story for those two.
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:iconjoesmoey:
JoeSmoey Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
that was sweet :,)
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Chroniton8990 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
Given their expressions I prefer to think Pansy blackmailed Hurricane with what she said in her sleep.
Pansy, "Bad mouth or abuse me again and they'll know all".
Hurricane *Gulp* "Okay".
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Loeden Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
Fantastic!  J'adore!
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JamesAlpha Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
WELP! This brony has a new deviant to watch now! That was pretty amazing. That page with the burial scene... I got choked up. Very strong story
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EchoOfTheWolf Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
Very good!
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MadOvid Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
...fuck man. 
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Macbow333 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
It may have been in the description on another page, but is this comic only going to follow Commander Hurricane and Private Pansy or will it follow the other two pairs as well?

Whether it does or doesn't, I'll look forward to what you have in store with great anticipation. Keep doing what you love and never stop improving.
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Rated-R-PonyStar Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
Commander Hurricane and Private Pansy are the main characters in this story. The others will be seen but as secondary characters
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:iconmacbow333:
Macbow333 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
Cool! Thanks for letting me know! You have a good thing going here. I look forward to what you have in store for us.
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:iconmutt42:
mutt42 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
very nice.  Very touching.
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tigreanpony Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
Wow, all I have to say is wow that was a great comic so well done. Hit me in the feels hard and brought manly tears to the surface.
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schneelocke Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
Oh, this is good! Very touching already - very intense, too, but the violence wasn't gratuitous; it served a legitimate purpose, and in that, it enhanced the story, painting it in stark tones and evoking a strong reaction from the viewer. I'm definitely looking forward to the rest of this, and I'll have to keep a +Watch on you to make sure I won't miss any pages!
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age3rcm Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
this comic make me think, is there is kindness on the battlefield?
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WingmanRed Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
Pretty awesome!
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987654321o Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Student General Artist
that was nice
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:iconzaiali:
zaiali Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
Damn right.

But you should have shown them as the real Commander hurricane and private pansy. 
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HeimoBauss Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is impressive.
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:iconx-jenster-x:
X-Jenster-X Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Student General Artist
CUTE!
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WindyChaser10 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
Wow
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Howling-Hybrid Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
Very nice! Was a fun read :)
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FinalShadow77 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
VERY well done! Not gonna lie, the art style got a little weird for me at times, but I still really did like it - it fit the comic well.

Always nice to see something that explores a character's traits, and you got it really nicely.
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mbreeden62 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
This entire series was extremely awesome!! An epic adventure tale but with heart and depth. The art work is just outstanding. You all did a terrific job and I can't wait for the next pages. Super work. Good luck to all of you!
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LokosFermincho Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Favorited every last one of them. Great job bro ;)
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AlphaOmega135 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
Damn this was good.... the style was epic, however, i felt that the story was kinda...cheesy. But, nonetheless, i had the feels.
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zombieinferno32 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
I imagine a deeper more masculine voice for thunderhead. I imagine his voice as Sam Worthington. (The main protagonist from the movie Avatar.)
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SimonOrJ Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Even though one page was mature-blocked for me, the whole story was understandable. This is a great story! Waaaah!
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The-Paranormal Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
Fantastic! Great job on this :iconiloveitmoreplz:
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DraconixSongnote Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow, thanks you for that comic
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marikazemus34 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Holy brass, dude. That was incredible.

I'm writing a story based around the aftermath of the formation of Equestrian, and a subplot revolves around Hurricane coping with his failures by focusing on his successes. Would it be okay if I borrowed some elements from this comic?
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Rated-R-PonyStar Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
Sure, both of us are okay with it as long as we can get a notice that we inspired you
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:iconmarikazemus34:
marikazemus34 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course, of course. Thank you very much.
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XLR82FAST Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
Manly tears were shed,  Bravo!
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Vektier Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
Best thing I've read in a long time. Great story!!!
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TwilightIsMagic Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Student General Artist
That was awesome.
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DarkestSunset Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
-appaulds-
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AdvancedDefense Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
:iconclapplz: Well done, James.
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